My town first draft of my essay.

I had to write a descriptive essay...and this is what I wrote for my essay's first draft...I should never be allowed to write first drafts XD

In the quaint town of *****, it is okay to go out and get drunk. No one will care. We aren’t like those dumb people over in --------- who think it is great to outlaw alcohol. That is after all, why ***** exists. We broke away from ---------  when they got all self-righteous and decided that alcohol was evil. My mind has now been blown because of the ruler button on Microsoft Word. Anyway, the people of ***** will always say Hello to anyone that they may meet on the street. Whether they know the person or not, it is the social norm to greet them.

Turtles, turtles, turtles, potatoes. This here is a paragraph about the dying downtown and how awesome it is with all its oldness and newness to it.

WAIT THERE’S MORE! Houses in ***** are very lovely. If you get a house there you will never want to leave. It has the small town feel to it and everything.

Then the school. The hallways are marked with their brick walls and colorful paintings. There is an obvious taste of welcoming there. If anyone were to suddenly be thrown into this school they are just accepted. No one excludes them from a group or activity. They are just expected to be able to join in right off the bat. If they didn’t want to join in though, that is okay as well. People in ***** ill try to make you feel as welcome as possible, but still act like they do on a normal day basis. In fact it is what they do on a normal day basis because that is just the way that they are! ANYWHO, people are awesome. There is always a layer of awesome going on when someone goes to *****  It all goes back to the playground. The playground is the best way to describe the way that ***** welcomes people because of the way it is. It is just awesome like that.